��?�?�花�?� - Summer fireworks
July 25, 2006
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Today was the last day of the Tenjin Matsuri (festival). I went there once three years ago. Because there were so many people there I didn’t really have much fun. Today I was able to see the fireworks from my balcony. I saw some red lights between some tall buildings in Umeda. I was alone so it got really boring and not fun at all. I think it’s better to watch fireworks with friends and loved ones.
July 30th, 2006 at 14:30
Hi, Jerry-san,
we’ll still have some more fireworks events in August.
I suggest you plan to watch Yodogawa Hanabi on 1st August with your wife.　(^_-)
Well, as we talked in class,
I’ll give you some feedback on your Japanese here:
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ビール　>>>　ビル
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相手　>>>　大切�人
The rest all sounds perfect.
Keep writing in Japanese!
July 30th, 2006 at 16:20
Sensei, thank you for the corrections! You’re more than welcome to write here anytime.